Chapter 4: Painted Faces and Long Hair
Perspective: Piggy
Ship!!!
I can’t believe Jack was acting so belligerent that we missed that ship. He was supposed to be watching that fire but he was so busy killing his pig that when the ship came by it didn’t see the fire because Jack and the hunters let it burn out. So while Ralph was running up to the mountain hoping the fire was still going Jack was in the forest slaying a pig and watching the gout drip out of its neck.
Those blatant fools came back from the forest with their pig hanging from a spear. They wanted my specs to build another fire and light it but I didn’t want them using them. So Jack violently took them from my face and started his fire. When he was done Ralph gave him a mouthful about the ship that passed. Jack was so mad that he threw my specs on the ground and the right lens cracked. When I picked up my glasses I stared at Jack malevolently.
When jack was giving out meat from the pig he gave it to everyone except me but Simon being kind as usual gave me his piece. When I took a bite of the meat it felt like balm on my lips. Simon got yelled at by Jack and he didn’t care. Jack has an impalpable heart he doesn’t care for anyone else it as if he thinks he’s better than us. All I know is that Jack really worries me because he has tight control over those hunters.
2 comments:
I like how you used your vocabulary words and you knew exactly what you were talking about. Also, I like how when you were in character you really seemed to be the character. You could tell that you were really in the book. Next, I like how you were very descriptive and described everything that happened in the book.
I like how you summed up the whole chapter but still got the important parts out of it, it makes it easier so we don't have to read a lot. I liked how you talked about him lighting the fire because I was Jack and didn't say anything about it and that shows you were listening. Also that you really seemed like you knew the vocab words and that you could use them in a conversation with me.
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